Angry Nature Poem by akram saqib

Angry Nature

Rating: 3.5


WHAT WILL ANGRY NATURE DO
WHEN
THWACKS OF DEBRIS
SLIDING MIGHTY GLACIERS
ZOOM OF SHOOTING GUNS
CLOUDS OF WHIRLING SMOKES
SHRILLY SHRIEKS OF
SWEAT SINGING BIRDS
EXPLOSION OF
NOVEL TYPE OF BOMBS
MAKING EVERY CREATURE
RUN A MUCK
PRAYER HOUSES IN DOLDRUMS
PRIESTS MULLAHS AND NUNS
PRAYING BUT WITHOUT EFFECT
RISING TOLL DAY BY DAY
THE CALAMITIES GROWING LIKE HAY
WITH WRATH NATURE IS SMILING
WHY THE MAN POKED NOSE
INSTEAD OF FOUNTAINS RISE SMOKE
COOL BREEZE DOES NOT BLOW
MEADOWS ARE THE DESERTS NEXT
EARTH IS QUAKING WITH MORE FORCE
THE WATER LEVEL RISING HIGH
FORECASTING A LAST DELUGE

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

angry nature..she has the right to fight against spoiling her air, waters and shores, with all the means the human declare a war against the beautiful nature.. a wondering and pondering thoughts very well put, was able to say what the angry weepy nature said..10++++

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Mohau Patric Maine 11 May 2009

the deeds of sense goes along with, more to say is only giving you my optimistic congrats for taking efforts, having the rival that nature express to us. maybe this talent of yours it goes with blood stream. for now i would like to hear, read it from published poetry book. GREAT-INSPIRING WRITING

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Anjali Sinha 11 May 2009

The earth yes shes the perfect mistress of the universe shes being abused a lot by us humans I think she revolts sometimes and shows her anger dont u think so? and yes she has a right to do the same lovely write dear akram -10 anjali

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C. P. Sharma 11 May 2009

An awesome song. When Nature is red in tooth and claw Its dreadful death dance has no flaw CP

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Sandra Martyres 11 May 2009

Yes Nature is revolting against its abuse by humanity in general...very good write Akram, but if I may suggest the impact would have been better had you not used large caps for the poem.10

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Amir Amzah 01 June 2009

a deep discription for painting the nature with an anger...... well done man. u could simply discribe an angry nature with words of wisdom. (WHY THE MAN POKED NOSE INSTEAD OF FOUNTAINS RISE SMOKE COOL BREEZE DOES NOT BLOW) a stanza line indeed..... once again Akram you got another great piece of urs....... good day to you.

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Bob Blackwell 25 May 2009

Akram, you write for cause, keep writing before mans greed destroys all that is beautiful. He cannot see the beauty, he cannot see the crime he commits. Well written piece. Bob

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Sid John Gardner. 15 May 2009

A cool tune Akram.Peace be with us all and may it silence the guns.Living in tolerance and recognising each mans dignity and right to persue his God in his own way has to be a code for life. Sid.

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Catrina Heart 13 May 2009

A fine nature write...imagery was well painted....

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*Smile4ever* 12 May 2009

U r right priests mullahs nd nuns are praying but without effect.. Coz its we ppl responsible for it.. When we completely surrender ourselves to the nature then the day ll come when its spreads love instead of anger.. By the way xclnt writing..10/10... Thanks for sharing.. *Smile4ever*

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