It reminded me off years of marriage
Life passed easily on simple carriage
Happy days with joy and I could manage
Nothing went wrong with time and passage
Bad days and cruel luck would have it
Lamp went off suddenly and could not be lit
Fate severely struck with perfect hit
He was taken away within a minute
I was dumbfounded and could not cry
Asked repeatedly for what crime and why?
Was there no alternative to spare him on earth?
Did not you think what will be condition aftermath?
I have witnessed many marriage anniversaries
all gave me enough joy and no worries
this only one incidence has saddened me so much
Great vacuum created in life and not easy to fill as such
It has left me in shock and completely paralyzed
Situation is so delicate and can't be analyzed
It has left deep scare on my shrinking mind
Unable to think positively and new alternatives to find
Every year you will come and take me off
I may not cry but can not hold the bluff
Will it be great tribute if I hold your memory fast?
It will remain with life till I breathe it last
I shall nobly act as you had desired
you teased always and got my work admired
who knew you will leave me alone to expire?
Your work may lead and thoughts to aspire
I shall continue to hold your spirit and strive
your ideas will remain alive and live and I shall revive
I shall make it livelier than life
I shall prove it to be honest as dedicated wife
Every year it will bring new lease of life and message
I will have to hold it fast to make smooth passage
No matter hold old I become with time and age
You memory will be fine print on the page
Life is simple mission to carry on
on real ground no battle is lost or won
It has to be taken as holy task
No pretence to be shown by wearing mask
It must not be go or no go situation
Life should be updated with evaluation
it demands sacrifice for any revolution
Power not in one hand but with complete devolution
It is not easy to forget happy moments
they were die hard and lovely movements
we may take it as reality of on going struggle
Life may end any time as water with bubble
The poem leaves an indelible imprint in the mind. The pang of separation of the the spouse is very difficult, specially if it is a sudden occurence As I have always expressed Hasmukh, your rhyming is very good.
It reminded me years of marriage Life passed easily with simple carriage...reminds us of our long association.....10
beautiful rhymes on a sad note...lovely sir....10
I shall nobly as you desired Always you teased and work admired Who knew you will leave and get expired? Your work may lead me and thoughts aspired I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife we have to face this situation one day or the other, The departure of loved one is apprehending, and painful
Yes; that indeed is God's inscrutable ways one has to accept! Pl. read my AFTER DEATH WHAT? in the PH.
All the poem is very beautifully written and very clear to understand
was dumbfounded and could not cry Asked repeatedly for what crime and why? .....10
I shall continue to thrive Your spirit will live and revive I shall make it livelier than life Prove to be honest and dedicated wife Beautiful lines written from heart directly!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a brilliant and deep tribute in verse.10/10