Another Therapeutic Poem Poem by Fred Babbin

Another Therapeutic Poem

Rating: 5.0


I’m pregnant again
with you my poems
My thoughts and feelings
Have screwed my brain
And this is the result.
I am still waiting for delivery
As you can see
But feeling great in my pregnancy
(This is the feminine side of me)

Sunday, August 3, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: pregnancy
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marilyn Lott 03 August 2008

Very short and clever. I like it! A 10! Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 December 2008

Im pregnant too.....my brains bloated with words! ! ! !

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James B. Earley 15 August 2008

A clever bit of descriptive writing! Excellent composition.

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Perhaps the cleverest brief acurate analogy I have ever seen on these pages.... t x

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James Timothy Jarrett 09 August 2008

Fred, Very descriptive. I love the line 'My thoughts and feelings have screwed my brain'

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Chitra - 06 August 2008

nice way of showing how poetry germniates

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