Anthony And Cleopatra Poem by Marieta Maglas

Anthony And Cleopatra

Rating: 4.9

If Anthony hadn't loved
in that last second,
maybe he would have
and he would have won
the war within him,
but he had loved her

more than ever

exactly in that second
that had driven him

toward awareness.

Therefore, he fell into death,
whereupon Cleopatra
should live.
She should have been
his widow to suffer
the consequences
and to understand

what real love means,

because her affair of the heart
was too pathetic
to have control over

the destiny of history.

Poem by Marieta Maglas

Friday, July 17, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: history,love,suffering,war
Sergio Bruno 20 November 2009

A poem that provokes intense love to anyone reading it.10

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Agnes Parker 02 October 2009

One of the William Shakespeare tragic work is revisited by your poetic heart in a very interesting view point............

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 September 2009

in order to understand from her suffering what means real love. Because her love was insufficient to fight against the destiny of should beunderstood by either of party as it stands unique in the history.. this reminds me of love pirncee edward who allowed throne to pass away for love....very good writeand appealing.....10 read nine...message... terrorial integrity

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Neha Aradhye 24 August 2009

that was a nice poem.... keep it up! ! !

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Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

a very nice poem....interesting one indeed! ! ! 10

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Dr. Antony Theodore 04 March 2021

her affair of the heart was too pathetic to have control over the destiny of history... Very good poem, the story and history of antony and cleo. tony

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Daniel Brick 27 July 2015

Your poem surely has a Shakespearean gravitas. In Shakespeare's play Antony abandons politics, honor (well, a militarist's view of honor) , and power to pass Cleopatra'a repeated tests of love. At one point, he admits she has taken him to the very heart of loss, but there he finds the heart of love too. After a century + of destructive warfare I believe we are ready to give this vision of love our advocacy, and not the vision of war and desolation.

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 12 December 2009

Jilts and spurns indeed a cuisine for poet …here poet caught the theme and cooked nicely…thanks…. Ten+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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nomad omnia 28 November 2009

We never know - will this love be our last?

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Ivan Kodorkovski 20 November 2009

this is too good! ! such eloquent words! ..10

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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