Glen Kappy

Gold Star - 21,731 Points (June 30,1948 / New York, NY USA)

Aroused From Dream, A Home Pome - Poem by Glen Kappy

Aroused from dream
I wake to her right by me—
so near! so far!

Topic(s) of this poem: dream, husband, marriage, sex, wife, winter

Form: Senryu


Comments about Aroused From Dream, A Home Pome by Glen Kappy

  • Daniel Brick (6/14/2017 8:03:00 PM)


    Shhh - I don't want to talk now - I don't want to disturb her sleep with unnecessary distractions. And I don't want to disturb you either. Come to thuink of it, the poem me in a reallyu mellow mood. I don't want to disturb myself.
    Shhh
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    Glen Kappy Glen Kappy (6/15/2017 7:16:00 AM)

    hi, daniel! can you tell? marriage has been teaching me patience. -g

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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (5/1/2017 2:50:00 AM)


    is marriage a dream?
    waking to her
    she is by me
    why so near and soooooo far?
    is it your experience of the marital life Glen? or is it a general experience of all who got married?
    i am not married so i do not know all these.......... simply fine...... so much in few verses. you brain thinks a lot dear Glen. thank u dear Glen
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    Glen Kappy Glen Kappy (5/1/2017 7:08:00 AM)

    tony,

    as always i appreciate your reading of and commenting on my poems.

    yes, this is from my experience of married life, from times when i had arousing dreams of my wife and woke up in the middle of the night with her so close, feeling her warmth, hearing her slow breathing, but not wanting to wake her.

    all relationships with the people closest to us require patience, yes?

    be blessed!

    glen

  • Laurie Van Der Hart (12/27/2016 9:14:00 AM)


    So much packed into a few words! Sad. Have you read my Oldly Married? (Report) Reply

    Glen Kappy Glen Kappy (12/27/2016 7:36:00 PM)

    i haven't read that one by you. i'll have to check it out. -glen

  • Glen Kappy (9/24/2016 3:09:00 PM)


    anil, thank you for writing. i'm glad you liked it. i just changed the poem a bit. i'd be interested to have you comment on whether the changes improved it or not. peace. -glen kappy (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda (9/24/2016 10:23:00 AM)


    Just beautiful.......Loved it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 24, 2016

Poem Edited: Monday, December 26, 2016


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