As A Child Grows (In Violence And Madness) Poem by Dave Alan Walker

As A Child Grows (In Violence And Madness)



As a child Grows they see
all that they are told
they watch you
and they copy you
no matter what you do

They see your violence
and your hate
and want to be
just like you

What you do
and what they see
mutates inside them

All they are left with
as they join the adult world
is anger of another kind
with madness as a sideline

Sunday, May 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: violence
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loyd C Taylor Sr 25 May 2014

Hello poet Dave. Thanks for your recent review. I enjoyed this poem and the strong message about being living examples of the right sort. Spot on. Loyd

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Carl Johnson 20 June 2019

Dear Mr. Walker, I just wanted to reach out and let you know that I recently composed a piece that uses the text of this poem. I wanted to let you know and see if you would be interested in listening to the piece. Please let me know if you would be? Thank you and have a great day! Sincerely, Carl Johnson

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Dave Walker 25 July 2019

Yes I'd love to hear it.

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Amitava Sur 24 April 2015

Very rightly you said here. A child has a photographic memory to imitate as what she / he sees. Hence, a child needs a proper environment to grow with.

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Soulful Heart 22 September 2014

oh the chain reaction of observation, assimilation, enactment, improvisation, mutation, .............on and on till the civilisation progreses in the backward direction of repeated histories of mistakes and follies.....nicely written

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 02 June 2014

Violence provokes violence. The media adds to that by presenting violence more than peace. Hope we realize the folly. Thank you.

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Jacob Victoria 31 May 2014

This is good, u did well but u can do better.

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