As A Moon Poem by hazem al jaber

As A Moon

Rating: 5.0


alone you sit there...
as a moon, alone there in his sky..
alone, faraway from all humanity...
alone you sit there...
watching my love through a nights..
alone you are there...
loving passionately a night and,
staying up all a nights..
looking attentively at you, while a stars around you...
as a king in his throne, around him his all collaterals..

oh.. oh..
missed you my moon..
and wish to be as a star around you...
to be always near and with you...


By hazem02

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Almedia Knight-Oliver 17 August 2009

a fresh perception of her being like the moon along in the sky.nice images: looking through nights.

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Kim Wood 08 September 2007

There is a Japanese man that told my fortune once, more like visual imagery. The moon represented the spouse, the sun yourself and the stars children.

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Jolanta Gradowicz 06 May 2006

It's very inventive.

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Charles M Moore 27 February 2006

This is a clever idea hazem, well done.

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