poet Asif Baloch

Asif Baloch

As Predicted (Incomplete)

when the veils of greed will cover the eyes
when the heart stops weep on the innocent cries
when the beast puts the human skin as disguise
just think that day once told will arise

when the respect will be put aside
and the shamelessness will be the fashion of life
when the men breaks all the rules of God
and he himself becomes God is his own eyes
just think that day once told will arise

when there will be the kingdom of evilness
and there wont be a place for poor and weakness
when there will be the killings and riots everywhere
and a brother will kill his own blood for just pleasure
just think that day once told will arise

when there will be short nights even shorter days
and a decade will looks like just yesterday
when there will be hunger and poverty everywhere
and human will kill human for just to be fed a day
just think dear, think
that day as predicted will arise

Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 15, 2009
Poem Edited: Monday, May 3, 2010

Add this poem to MyPoemList
4,8 out of 5
5 total ratings
rate this poem

Comments about As Predicted (Incomplete) by Asif Baloch

  • Asif Gopang (12/11/2009 10:50:00 PM)

    Dear it’s good as like u! (I miss u) . after read that...! I can see ur personality hidden intelligence it’s very good keep writing, we LOVE U and ur thought. YOURS.

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Dr Kamran Haider (1/22/2009 12:56:00 PM)

    Truth nothing but truth... Excellent work... You have a great vision my friend...

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (1/19/2009 5:29:00 AM)

    Unfortunately your poem is crying out the truth of what our world is fast becoming. I often imagine myself as an alien arriving in this world and seeing the devastation and fruitless wars human beings create. Asif this poem is brilliant and you are spot on! Excellent work. Karin Anderson

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Seema Aarella (1/17/2009 7:36:00 AM)

    It gives me jitters just the thought of such day......as expected it will all happen one day, just like we destroy a dead appliance, god will cast the doom and destroy this earth! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Eveything is sure!

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • sumaira .....ir (1/17/2009 3:58:00 AM)

    A true and very sensitive poem which show us the reality of life... Thankx dear i really respect yer thoughts.

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Aijaz Asif (1/15/2009 12:00:00 PM)

    yes Anju you are absolutely right, that day has arisen and that day is today and every coming day and i think that day can be changed by YOU, ME & EVERY OTHER person who's heart greive for the happenings in the world today, cause I've seen it, in the verses written by many poets here on PH, who rose their words against the cruelty and wars put on innocents and I bow You & Everyone of Them for the purity of there heart....

    One day the sun will rise
    with happiness in its eyes
    spreading rays of love and peace
    smiling gracefully to You & Me
    One Day, One Day
    and soon that one day will some

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Anjali Sinha (1/15/2009 7:17:00 AM)

    I think that day has arisen
    its here---
    tell me
    how are YOU and ME
    gonna make it
    go to its grave again
    tell me
    so that it
    NEVER RISES AGAIN

    inspirational write Asif
    I loved it
    A+++and many 10ssssss
    regards anju

    Report Reply
    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?