As The Flame... Poem by poppy miller

As The Flame...

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As the flames in flamenco dance
Show off their vibrant hues
Of tangerine and cinnabar
I notice, not a note of various blues

And as the eye fixes on the flame
The mind drifts back to summer skies
To golden sands and sun kissed bodies
Content, relaxed, with smiling sighs

But now the ashes fall; another thought,
That moves me on to lusty autumn
In all her finery; and once again
The flamenco beats to the expected drum

Of the wind; that will have its way,
Lightly at first, playing with the sun
Then to gasp with mighty zest
To strip bare, nature's beauty just for fun

The embers now have lost their glow;
The dance is spent, the coals are dead
And I, must away and trod the stair
At this late hour to my bed

But happy it is, this humble soul
Who cannot wait for dawn to come
For spring arrived at my door today
admired by many and adored by some.

5/3/2015

Friday, March 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: seasons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 23 May 2016

The dance is spent! And to respect nature. Thanks for sharing.

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Poppy Miller 23 May 2016

Thanks Edward. Indeed, what would we do when times are difficult if we didn't have natue to depend on?

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 April 2016

And as the eye fixes on the flame The mind drifts back to summer skies To golden sands and sun kissed bodies Content, relaxed, with smiling sighs........ such a wonderful poem. images, images, images.... your poem is flowing in beauty, in colour and in music........ thank you dear poet. tony this humble soul is happy.

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Poppy Miller 23 May 2016

Hi Tony, I'm so glad you enjoyed this one. It's been a beautiful day today and I've spent the whole day long in the garden. Sheer bliss!

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Poppy Miller 30 March 2016

Thanks once again John. A welcome response.

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Terry Dawson 12 March 2016

Wonderful as usual, Poppy! Well done on this on!

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Poppy Miller 14 March 2016

I answered your comment Terry but it doesn't seem to have sent. Thankyou for the lovely comment.

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Poppy Miller 14 March 2016

Hello Terry. Thanks for your comment, it is appreciated. It's wonderful to see the sun shining once more. Some of the flowers are blooming and everything else well in bud.

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Kim Barney 11 March 2016

This is very good, Poppy. And just your name makes me think of springtime... :)

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Poppy Miller 14 March 2016

I'm glad you enjoyed this Kim. Yes, spring has finally arrived here.

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