As You Come To My Senses....... Poem by Antonio Liao

As You Come To My Senses.......

Rating: 5.0


walk down the path, full of passing memories
and win the past, leaving to the sadness of limbo
into the garrison of ghettos, where you'll stay

speed off, what you've have felt the drowning
pulse of a beating heart and wait the pleasing
moment of my spirited wings of satisfying hope
in you

close my envy of what was your dream, climb
the thundering fears of returning beauty in your
aspiration, as you touch my forgiving hammock
of strength, pushing to stand in my mid-air stunt
of reality

go, an extra mile for the step i stop, may leads
your way to find the real and genuine high way of
what you want to reach; the sand dunes, ashore the
beautiful pebbles of every rock shattered in the cliff
of water

open of what is close and please close of what was
is open to accept the heraldic search of what is the
senses find, as the ending song started of every lyric
you sing, and begins in your harmonics tune in the
key of C

come and as you leave, to what you'll have
started; stay and forward, hold your day's of the past,
aim high and accept of what is weak, before a winner
shout for joy in every heart that call

hold my hand and forget the day, soon you will
find and reach the sky.....of today

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

The feeling of love, calmness and enjoyment is well intensified in the poem with a rather splendid description of what every pure soul wishes for and desires to have attained otherwise.....10/10

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rago rago 19 June 2009

as you comet to my senses....... the last line really superb as written by ashraful musaddeq........ just breathtaking lines.........see my 10 ++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 June 2009

A beautiful poem. Last two lines are wonderful. Love it,10+

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a deep, touchong and welled poem...so beautifully penned..10+++++++ go, an extra mile for the step i stop, may leads your way to find the real and genuine high way of what you want to reach; the sand dunes, ashore the beautiful pebbles of every rock shattered in the cliff of water open of what is close and please close of what was is open to accept the heraldic search of what is the senses find, as the ending song started of every lyric you sing, and begins in your harmonics tune in the key of C come and as you leave, to what you'll have started; stay and forward, hold your day's of the past, aim high and accept of what is weak, before a winner shout for joy in every heart that call hold my hand and forget the day, soon you will find and reach the sky.....of today

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