Emu Getachew

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Ask Me Again - Poem by Emu Getachew

How did we come to be here, ask me again?
Quietly, resting with our eyes ajar,
intoxicated by each others skin,
we are but silence wrapped in spell,
he lays words in my mouth, slowly nibbling,
with my face inside his eyes… he asked me again,
to love again at that corner bookstore,
same time, same day, same second,
same year…
I say, ask me again, my mirage,
after all when lovers converge,
the sun turns into an ocean.

©Emu Getachew February 2,2010

Comments about Ask Me Again by Emu Getachew

  • (2/11/2010 6:56:00 AM)

    after all when lovers converge
    the sun turns into an ocean

    Is the best part of this poem, I love this - Ask me again, a lovely start and a romantic end. NIce to read...
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  • (2/6/2010 1:16:00 PM)

    After enjoying the poem I wondered to myself - could it have been written any better? 10 (Report) Reply

  • John Knight (2/3/2010 4:21:00 AM)

    Hi Emu - This is revelationary - I love it. Scores a ten for structure (dynamic) contents (awesome) and impact (immediate) it is all a Good Poem should be. Line 3 is all about the sense of touch - it is so intoxicating - and so so important in a real loving relationship - TOUCH ME AGAIN. Line 5 The importance of words - that is why POETRY is such a Global Force - ASK ME AGAIN.
    Lines 678 The power of place - nostalgia - deja vu (disambiguation) - TAKE ME BACK TO THERE AGAIN. The ending is infinite. 'I say ask me again my mirage - after all when lovers converge - the Sun turns into an Ocean - AWESOME. Your last line is a beautiful poem - well done Emu thanks for sharing. Love you lots in Poetry - JOHN.
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  • (2/3/2010 2:46:00 AM)

    a very tender poem Emu, I enjoyed reading it........

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  • (2/2/2010 9:46:00 PM)

    what a poetic title and romantic way written poem..liked it 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Is It Poetry James Mclain (2/2/2010 8:32:00 PM)

    you are but silence wrapped
    in the arms of his charm,
    it extends from the words in my mouth,
    around it's slowly,
    with my face with lt' s interior of its eyes...iip
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  • Romeo Della Valle (2/2/2010 8:03:00 PM)

    Wow, what a well penned poem, true feelings coming out from the bottom of the heart not from barren lips...Keep it up, you got the talent...10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 6:47:00 PM)

    wow that was really seductive... yeah, i agree with Black Bird (Report) Reply

  • (2/2/2010 6:10:00 PM)

    wow amazing =] my mind kept thinking of love, as in like a first love type of thing then it suddenly changed to a well maybe the character is more of a mistress? Anyway I loved it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 2, 2010

Poem Edited: Thursday, February 11, 2010

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