Asking More Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Asking More
Whole body is asking more,
Never had it happened this before?
No lament and feel so sore,
May have some reasons therefore,
It is generating more heat,
Whole body demand something,
Nothing is in scarce but still seeks,
Feeling inside feeble and weak,
May be it has not fully rained,
Not poured with strength and drained,
In time of need always abstained,
Leaving behind worry and pain,
Not a slight or slow rain drops will do,
I am wanting then is also true,
But why it is so desperate? Have no clue,
Eyes up in sky to see could blue,
Only full rain with tremendous force,
Lightening, thunder with wind of course,
Strike at body with complete passion,
Not to be told but, it is frank admission,
Not a body but earth to long,
Ready to embrace with sultry song,
Whole area to come on with green grass,
Show for self and world its class,
Rain in short is the only answer,
Will come in force to enlighten soul,
Complete happiness with cool shower,
Body too may feel with shower fewer,
So time is answer and timely change,
One should adapt and timely arrange,
Nature responds with exact time and arrives,
It is we only be impatient and connive?
Only full rain with tremendous force, Lightening, thunder with wind of course, Strike at body with complete passion,
Not a slight or slow rain drops will do, I am wanting then is also true, ...10
No lament and feel so sore, May have some reasons therefore, .....10
So time is answer and timely change, One should adapt and timely arrange, Nature responds with exact time and arrives, It is we only be impatient and connive wonderful piece 10
‘…Nature responds with exact time and arrives…’ In 3 dimensional world …yeah Time is bottomline of every occurrences and nonoccurrence… Wait till time comes with fermenting urge in inside …like ‘fill it found it’ Excellent eye opener as usual form your heart to stir our heart 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK
So time is answer and timely change, One should adapt and timely arrange, Nature responds with exact time and arrives, It is we only be impatient and connive................yes its a special human character to be impatient n trouble his own soul isnt it? ? ?
Yes; absolutely right that one should adopt - to lead a peaceful life!
We have to bear the brunt of pysical force in our life we should be prepared to take the easily
you have a wongerful array of adjectives in this one...very good
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12/6/2025 7:40:51 PM # 1.0.0
Imbuement with nature. Varsa Ritu [Rainy Season] was favorite of R.N.Tagore. You’ve brought me to that RNT’s nostalgia. Ten gladly dr. sakti