Asset (Your Smile) Poem by Mrudula Rani

Asset (Your Smile)

Rating: 5.0


If you were to compete for fun,
Contra the moon and the sun,
With your magnificent grin,
You would definitely win.
For the sun is callously warm,
The moon isn't constant in form,
Whilst your smile forever a charm.

Asset (Your Smile)
Monday, December 23, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: smile
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A smile cures the wounding of a frown- William Shakespeare
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 23 December 2019

A smile can indeed be a huge asset ...

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Mrudula Rani 23 December 2019

I do agree with your supposal. Thank you

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Dr. Antony Theodore 02 January 2021

With your magnificent grin, You would definitely win. lovely, i smiled after readin your poem today. tony

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Mrudula Rani 04 January 2021

Glad to know that my poem made you smile. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 July 2020

A well composed poem. Simply delightful....10+++

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Mahtab Bangalee 06 July 2020

Smiling forever a charm .......great; exactly

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Chinedu Dike 15 January 2020

A concise and compelling composition elegantly embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Beautiful piece, nicely put together. Thanks for sharing, Rani.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 January 2020

Beautiful poem read my poems all full of charm start with MOMS SMILES u will love it

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