At Four O'Clock This Afternoon Poem by Pete Crowther

At Four O'Clock This Afternoon

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There’s a V-shaped gap where the tall hedge parts
By the garden gate and it frames a view
Of a sycamore tree with a field beyond.
In summer there’d be a herd of cows
But it’s empty now — just a bare-branched tree
And the high green bank of an estuary.
At four o’clock this afternoon
Behind the tree and above the bank
I saw the sun about to set
Orange-red in a plain grey sky.
The world for a moment then was just
A setting sun, a leafless tree,
A field, a river bank, and me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Hepner 13 December 2005

Your poem made me think of a Matisse landscape!

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Uriah Hamilton 12 December 2005

Simply beautiful, in a quiet landscape you caught your soul.

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Ernestine Northover 11 December 2005

This poem is a sheer joy to read, Peter. I loved the last two lines, they made this poem so good. Love Ernestine XXX

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Amanda Lukas 11 December 2005

Presents a feeling of calmness. Very soothing. Thanks!

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Pete Crowther

Pete Crowther

Hull, East Yorkshire, England
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