I was there
At the temple
Over the hills
Once inside
I was seeing
Him.
The priest
Asked me
To move away
In a punishing tone
And God stood
Motionless.
Once again a beautiful poem. Though we feel God stood motionless but its the God itself had called us to temple. There are many times even a visit to our temple is obstructed many times.....loved reading it. Thank you for sharing.
Sad is the behavior of priest. God didn't stay motionless. He moved so many through you!
Why searching God in temple.that is the shop of priest. well written.
So profound! But, justice comes somehow.It's my experience.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Motionless and it is God, empty-existence. I like it.