At The Waiting Hall Poem by Perdita Young (Hanna Wang)

At The Waiting Hall

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At the waiting hall, across the bars
of vision and railings cold
she saw a limpid pond
in his cool eyes,
a delightful Sur-Prise.

She leaped and dived
a hearty dive
to the very depths and freely swam
the glittering of the pond with no beginning nor ending…

But bells rang abrupt, startled
a bluebird on the waters dozing;

It flapped its wings, though reluctant to fly,
left strands of thought
a-floating in the air…

At a same time, she departed
from him, on a journey, to directions different—

Further and further away they drift,
their figures vaporizing,
to shapes of haze fading.

A chance encounter is
a sense of endless loss,
unable to shake it off
in a whole later life.

Jan.22th,2008.

At The Waiting Hall
Tuesday, March 20, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: carpe diem,destiny,life,loss,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nudershada Cabanes 23 March 2018

A beautifully crafted poem Perdita.I love the last stanza. Superb. 10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 March 2018

A marvelous poem beautifully crafted. Very touching lines. Yes, loss sometimes lingers in our mind and heart.10

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Shakil Ahmed 20 March 2018

Destiny and life walk side by side, nice idea, you have painted your passion very well, thanks

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