Ravi Sathasivam


At This Moment..... - Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

At this moment means a lot for me

The moment when I saw your face

My heart felt silent and your words felt great to me

I felt that love rules the world and not only that moment

You showed me what real love could do to keep me happy

and you fulfilled by dreams with everything that I have today

From this moment I felt you are mine

and I can promise anything to make you happy with my love

When you wrap me in your arms, never felt alone

and you made me to understand the value of love

Like the moon dance between the clouds and the sky

I dance between your heart and soul with my emotions

When the nights became like a romantic world to me

then I felt my moment with you like my dream come true

From that moment your image is deepen in my heart

and want to clutch you in place where you feel enlightened

Like an ocean wave your kisses wet my lips every time

while my foot prints leave mark in the sand with shyness

From this moment there is no one else I could see

other than our two hearts together and love that sets free

These are the moment I want to be with you for ever



Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka


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  • (6/6/2010 11:46:00 PM)

    ‘My heart felt silent and your words felt great to me’

    Made silent heart feels always extras …what rippled heart can’t…

    Silence is nothing but deep engrossment of what is great
    Nice poetry
    10//10
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
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  • (5/23/2010 9:23:00 AM)

    Wow! Very beautiful poem involves so much with love and feelings... well written enjoyed reading it...Thanks for sharing 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • (4/18/2010 3:21:00 PM)

    An eloquent, poetic love letter.
    Lovely work...

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/14/2010 8:33:00 AM)

    At this moment means a lot for me

    The moment when I saw your face

    My heart felt silent and your words felt great to me

    I felt that love rules the world and not only that moment...lovely moments to feel elated and wonderful creation i may term it.....i liked....10

    read mine.love at first sight, , , marry to merry....
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  • Luwi Habte (9/16/2009 2:30:00 PM)

    At this moment, , ,
    nice poem and nice idea as well
    thanks for sharing
    peace
    luwi
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  • (9/16/2009 7:16:00 AM)

    a very nice poem, lovely expressions (Report)Reply

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  • (9/1/2009 5:58:00 AM)

    wow.... such a beautiful love poem... a 10++ (Report)Reply

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  • Mark Nwagwu (8/31/2009 3:45:00 PM)

    great love poem, Ravi; great love poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Hebert Logerie Sr. (8/29/2009 6:38:00 PM)

    This is a dazzlingly great poem. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/29/2009 9:23:00 AM)

    Excellent simile, Ravi:
    ''Like the moon dance between the clouds and the sky

    I dance between your heart and soul with my emotions''
    wonderful lyric poem, lovely to read.....................10+++++++
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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/29/2009 8:29:00 AM)

    yes its fine work out! a moment is great! Nice wording!
    10+
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  • (8/29/2009 8:26:00 AM)

    Hey this is the most beautiful poem, I have read from yours so far! ! !
    filled with emotions,
    So very lovely... very beautiful indeed! !
    yet kinda hurts cause I haven't felt like this ever, and love is all pain for me..
    I don't know ever I can write like this..
    Fall in love so much beautiful, that is what every one says..
    for me it always ends with pain with people..., very nice.. filled with emotions..

    love
    shan
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  • (8/29/2009 5:42:00 AM)

    A dance of love and romance to set you in perfect harmony with your beloved. Wonderful flow with
    the magic of your words to create a beautiful poem. 10 love Karin
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/29/2009 5:23:00 AM)

    other than our two hearts together and love that sets free

    These are the moment I want to be with you for ever.........this is what two hearts long fo r each other.... beautiful feelings and well done....10

    read mine miss i miss you.#(top 500) .. anywhere...and butterflies around
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  • (8/29/2009 2:30:00 AM)

    oh! what a great love poem! i congradulate you for keeping such pristine thoughts on your beloved, who must be one of the the luckiest lady in this world.
    voted 10
    surya
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  • (8/29/2009 2:24:00 AM)

    a fantastic love poem witha superd flow (Report)Reply

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  • (7/6/2008 1:13:00 PM)

    an excellent poem. true feelings of love is displayed. every word of this poem flows from the heart and touches the heart. well done sir i truly enjoyed reading this wonderful composition. (Report)Reply

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  • (7/6/2008 4:33:00 AM)

    the beauty of eternity captured in one moment (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 30, 2005

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 29, 2010


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