Autumn Leaves Poem by Phil J Hambling

Very amazing expression with wise humor is shared casting in ti the flux. Nature is wonderful. Breeze deals the life card. Interesting sharing done definitely....10

Excellent metaphors. A good 5*

Captures the eyes like the colors of fall! ! Beautiful! !

Superb metaphor, what a beautiful picture. Excellent.

The metaphors of card-game syncs well with the fall- the falling of deciduous leaves. Wonderful imagination. Novel idea.enjoyed it. Five stars.

Casting into the flux the torn tickets of time, ..... a very fine expression and the coinage of words put together gives life to the poem...... thank you dear poet. tony