Autumn- Season Of Concern Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Autumn- Season Of Concern

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Autumn- the season of concern
Monday,7th September 2020

The spring
it has failed to bring
the tremendous changes
in my age

why could I not notice?
that I need to promise
and surprise
with the changes

I remained least concerned
and did not turn
the changes in favour
I looked a fool and miser

autumn has knocked on the door
I am gripped with the fear
what shall be the next?
Nothing best I could do so far!

night brings the show of dark clouds
and makes the threatening sound,
will it take away my soul?
I desperately wait to respond to the call

Dr Jadia Hasmukh

Autumn- Season Of Concern
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 07 September 2020

will it take away my soul? I desperately wait to respond to the call Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2020

Poem: 59138545 - Autumn- Season Of Concern Member: Mahtab Bangalee Comment: night brings the show of dark clouds and makes the threatening sound, will it take away my soul? I desperately wait to respond to the call......the autumnal call is important in a poetic life where the inner sense awakes the the lazy spirit of penning;

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2020

Poem: 59138545 - Autumn- Season Of Concern Member: Mahtab Bangalee it's amazing poem that where the spring season is reviving spirit of life there a poet finds his concerning in autumnal nature; great- congrats Sir for being selected this poem as POD...always 5***** for your excellent submission

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 October 2020

Honored the poetic expression in the crown of the autumnal maple leaves There live flowing river wants to be accompanied with blowing breeze there the flying birds want to be bosom chum with roaming poetic minds there the honey bees seeking the virgin buds with sobered fragrance there the poet seeking the awaken concerning in the autumnal womb.......

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Mahtab Bangalee 05 October 2020

night brings the show of dark clouds and makes the threatening sound, will it take away my soul? I desperately wait to respond to the call......the autumnal call is important in a poetic life where the inner sense awakes the the lazy spirit of penning; it's amazing poem that where the spring season is reviving spirit of life there a poet finds his concerning in autumnal nature; great- congrats Sir for being selected this poem as POD...always 5***** for your excellent submission

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Emmanuel Joseph Olumakiss 07 October 2021

Congratulations sire well deserved

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 October 2021

Sure you must be very proud of her. Excellent poem, Sir! My regards to Dr. Jadia.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 05 October 2021

Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, Sir. My great appreciations to your relative's sweet poem being honoured. She wrote fabulous!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2020

Poem: 59138545 - Autumn- Season Of Concern Member: Mahtab Bangalee Comment: Honored the poetic expression in the crown of the autumnal maple leaves

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 October 2020

Poem: 59138545 - Autumn- Season Of Concern Member: Mahtab Bangalee there the flying birds want to be bosom chum with roaming poetic minds there the honey bees seeking the virgin buds with sobered fragrance there the poet seeking the awaken concerning in the autumnal womb.......

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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