Autumn- Season Of Concern Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Autumn- Season Of Concern
Autumn- the season of concern
Monday,7th September 2020
The spring
it has failed to bring
the tremendous changes
in my age
why could I not notice?
that I need to promise
and surprise
with the changes
I remained least concerned
and did not turn
the changes in favour
I looked a fool and miser
autumn has knocked on the door
I am gripped with the fear
what shall be the next?
Nothing best I could do so far!
night brings the show of dark clouds
and makes the threatening sound,
will it take away my soul?
I desperately wait to respond to the call
Dr Jadia Hasmukh
Spring has failed to bring changes but autumn has brought up many changes and beauty. The changes are favoured well. A great poem is excellently penned. A nice member poem of the day is chosen by the editors. CONGRATULATIONS!
A well composed poem of the day. Truly marvelous...5 stars*****
Dear Hasmukh Sir and Dr. Jadia, on this earth, there is a birth in which God says: niothing to be worried about I shout out in God's eyes and in God's love No things to be concerned about so I say loud: Please all the seasons throughout the year included autumn, no things to fear, all angst will disappear, just pray to the Lord and ask Him for it, thank you for your amazing poem about autumn,5 stars!
Sure you must be very proud of her. Excellent poem, Sir! My regards to Dr. Jadia.
Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, Sir. My great appreciations to your relative's sweet poem being honoured. She wrote fabulous!
Poem: 59138545 - Autumn- Season Of Concern Member: Mahtab Bangalee Comment: Honored the poetic expression in the crown of the autumnal maple leaves
Poem: 59138545 - Autumn- Season Of Concern Member: Mahtab Bangalee there the flying birds want to be bosom chum with roaming poetic minds there the honey bees seeking the virgin buds with sobered fragrance there the poet seeking the awaken concerning in the autumnal womb.......
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will it take away my soul? I desperately wait to respond to the call Dr Jadia Hasmukh