Autumn Whispers

Rating: 5.0

When you hear all those trees
how they sing in the breeze
with their branches and leaves
which are now falling down
to cover the bare ground
and pile up in a mound
from where all of them grow
they begin then to show
that season we well know.
______________________

Wednesday, August 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,falling,leaves,season,trees
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
About the song of the trees in Autumn.
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Troy Cochran 06 October 2017

The cadence of the poem has the feel of falling leaves; very apt. Art mimicking nature. :) I like the simplicity of this poem. It need say no more. That is Autumn's song, indeed: the Falling of leaves, the whisper of trees....

2 0 Reply
George Krokos 10 October 2017

Thanks for reading and your kind interesting comments Troy.

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 August 2017

Wow! it is amarvellous poem on Autumn with stunning expression. Wonderful imaginary. Thanks for sharing.

2 0 Reply
George Krokos 10 October 2017

Thanks for reading and your very encouraging comments KM.

0 0 Reply
Mahtab Bangalee 20 May 2019

it seems this poem whispers me sweetly with rhythm of autumnal songs

0 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 11 April 2019

how they sing in the breeze with their branches and leaves... you begin the poem with a great and poetic lines. thank u dear poet. tony

0 0 Reply
Loke Kok Yee 11 March 2018

This is such a beautiful description of Autumn, And gives a clear idea to those who live without the seasons a feel of the season. Thank you

1 0 Reply
George Krokos 28 March 2018

Thanks for reading and your kind comments Loke. Much appreciated.

0 0 Reply
Rebecca Navarre 19 December 2017

A Beautiful Poem! ! ! ! ! Full Of Autumn Spirit Whispering! ! ! ! ! Ever So Lovely! ! ! ! ! Thank You Ever So Much For Sharing This! ! ! ! ! Endless 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

0 0 Reply
Galina Italyanskaya 26 October 2017

Such a lovely poem! Everything comes back around. Thank you for sharing!

1 0 Reply