Autumn's Deceit Poem by Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Autumn's Deceit

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Suddenly, as if by magic
the green maple dons
bright gay hues,
flowers, we rejoiced;

With the same suddenness
they fall,
the maple stands nude
unable to even bow her head in shame.

Autumn's deceit.

But, she does not go unpunished:
over her grave
marches in
winter grave!

Autumn's Deceit
Tuesday, October 15, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: autumn,magic,nature,seasons
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 19 October 2024

But there is truth in Spring

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Bri Edwards 23 October 2024

What iS 'truth', pray tell? ; 0

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Spring is the only truth/ because she yields fruit.

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Thank you, dear poet. Autumn deceives the maple as well as man and every other creature, even Nature Herself, by faking Spring.

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Autumn hides a lot, and revels on borrowed hues, purloined gaiety….

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M.J. Lemon 04 November 2024

A perfect tribute to autumn. This is a fantastic verse, Unnikrishnan.

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Rajitha K.S. Ayyappan 25 October 2024

Lovely poem on Autumn. Loved the personification in the poem

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Grateful to you, dear poet. Autumn's deception in nothing, when compared with winter's cruelty. You may read my poem "A Winter in Delhi"

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My friend Bri Edwards has commented on the poem in detail. His comments do not appear on the poem page yet. And he has kindly consented that I need not reply to every point he raised. I know he has his answers. Hahaha

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Bri Edwards 24 October 2024

LASTLY (I think) : 'The potential problem with using SYMBOLISM in writing is (I say) that the readers may not interpret the symbolism as the author does. The reader may be confused or mistaken in her/his interpretation of it (the symbolism) .

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

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PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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