Avalanche Poem by Aufie Zophy

Avalanche

Rating: 5.0


Looks like we are in the coldest winter
With ice peaks of chilly greed everywhere.
But soon an eternal spring of wisdom
Will make greed crash like a huge avalanche
And melt it in the warm water of the lake
Leaving behind lofty peaks and hills
Filled with the amazing greenery of
Kindness
Love and
Peace

Friday, February 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: kindness,love,peace
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the poem, in the not so distant future by Dave Walker.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 27 February 2019

Looks like we are in the coldest winter With ice peaks of chilly greed everywhere.... Looks like, you are pretty concerned about the all-round greed in the world we live in. If so, we think alike. I too have a few pieces on the subject, a recurring theme I liked what I read.

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Valsa George 27 February 2019

A poem full of hope and positive vibes! Let us believe that the avalanche of hatred and animosity will melt by the warmth of love and consideration and a new era of peace and amity will dawn for mankind as winter will yield way to spring! Great thoughts! A 10

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Mj Lemon 16 February 2019

This is the greatest hope for the future there is. I think everyone on the planet is actually 'green.' We need to stop and consider what kind of 'green.' This a superb verse. It goes to myfavourites.

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