There is no evidence to say that-
he is not here.
There is no neeed for any evidence to say that-
he is very much here.
There were a few avatars to say that-
he was here.
Let us leave the 'avatars' who have already left
Let us leave the 'avatars' who are yet to come
Today's 'Avatars' are-
THE WIND
THE SUN
THE MOON-besides
YOU and ME.
nice concepts..someone is watching you/us...great write... Ency Bearis
Preaching lines...that everything is godly..everything is avatar..great concept
'Today's 'Avatars' are- THE WIND THE SUN THE MOON-besides YOU and ME.' wowwwwwwwww so realistic wonderful concepts of avatars (If I may say something for the ph brethren who dont know what is an avatar please explain by way of an asterisk at the bottom of your poem) +++++10 regards anjali
Avatars - ghosts, had been there, are here and will be there in minds of those who believe in such things, from east, west, north and south. It's more psychological than real, I feel. This is what the poet is trying to highlight. Great concept and a courageous write!
Perfect poem, the title itself is so catching But tell me one thing, inthis so called modern world, everybody needs proof for anything and everything, Isn't? i think thats why we are so un happy, if we are happy then the situation is something like that we have prove we are happy!
Avatar...That word my first time hearing it in a poem...Nice poem by the way...
Avatar...That word my first time hearing it in a poem...Nice poem by the way...
a message well told indirectlly... 'learn to live the excitements of the present'...good piece...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
splendid! that very well talks about what I believe as a Buddhist..Avatars...wonderful...