Awake Poem by Rehan Hyder

Awake

Rating: 4.3


Night has awakened with its
rustling claws; searing shearing;
meager remnants of sleep

Soon the bins of home unworthy
thoughts, littering streets of forehead
would stench signs
that undo fastenings
“of happily ever afters”

Last of fires from your shoulders
where my head had rested once
offered some hope
to wrest out winter
from the frozen lines
of fate

In that endless jungle of insomnia
someone laughed
I washed and enshrouded
Another corpse of laughter

Perhaps nights always
have the last laugh

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 10 June 2009

wonderful complex metaphor ''Last of fires from your shoulders where my head had rested once offered some hope to wrest out winter from the frozen lines of fate '' embedded in a wonderful poem...10++

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Viola Grey 10 May 2009

wow...the darkness here is simply gorgeous...and I love love love the third stanza...excellent write my friend.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 02 February 2009

'perhaps nights always have the last laugh' Wah Wah! ... excellent.tasteful a gem glistening in the dark of night.

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