Awaken With Oneness Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Awaken With Oneness

Rating: 5.0


When the sun has gone deep
And the moon emerged on the horizon
A caller called me to follow in the wee hours of the night
Like a deer chasing the musk I followed unconditionally
through ravines, forests and hills.
Then I thought is it wise to chase something I know not?
I paused momentarily like a rabbit caught in the headlights,
The voice slowly approached me and said "Follow your heart" you are far from all worries now.
Slow down and ponder, don't run carelessly and chase mirages.
Life is not all about the rat race to run and win, rather it is about taking others with you as you go along the path.
The oneness in me got awake as I came out of my sleep.

Wednesday, June 8, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical,lessons of life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juhaina Tumlu 08 June 2022

Excellent poem and the last line is fabulous, The oneness in me got awake as I came out of my sleep.

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Nabakishore Dash 10 June 2022

Awesome dear Dr Nehal.

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Beautiful poem, dear Asim ji.....Top score and to my favourite

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Life is not all about the rat race to run and win, rather it is about taking others with you as you go along the path. A philosophy, truth and action that i would like to follow in my life.

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A profound poem so well penned. Never run carelessly and aimlessly chasing mirages

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Anjandev Roy 08 June 2022

Wisely penned..... as usual....thank u, dear friend...

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