Awakening Goddess (Part 1) Poem by Alison Smith

Awakening Goddess (Part 1)

Rating: 4.3


The goddess has been awakened
Once again the body and soul must be fed
For so long her desires have been buried
Was there one who could uncover them?

Would her god be able to see her desires?
Could her prone figure entice him?
She sent out her message to him
A picture to paint her desires.

To once again be the power she once was
Her passions and desires must be fulfilled
No mere mortal could last the ordeal
When the union of ecstasy runs riot.

At last the goddess stands before her god
As foreseen the sight of her ignites him
Thoughts of hours of passion erupts within
He knows he needs no other.

She has brought him to a grove beside a stream
Her body aglow with her need
Her touch upon his skin electric
Neither could stop this now.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 24 March 2007

Alison, awesome my friend. Your beautiful style always gets to me. I loved this and can not wait until part two tomorrow. Top marks from me, your friend from the top end of the planet. Thanks for sharing it. David

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Declan McHenry 29 March 2007

Stirring stuff.

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Tired of Being Exploited 26 March 2007

excellent fantasy prose. very interested in part 2...

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Jerry Hughes 24 March 2007

...seems you've let the genie out of the bottle Allie, keenly awaiting what follows

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 24 March 2007

Alison... There is so much passion in this poem, you can feel it in every word Alison, i can`t wait for part two... sounds like the goddess has found love again and how...10

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Duncan Wyllie 24 March 2007

Etheral writing, could paint the pictures easily, like a film clip Great work here Love duncan X

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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