Away, away!
I command thee, spiritus.
This be not thy stay,
Remember the forbidden laws.
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Away, away!
My heart insists still,
In the night or in the day,
Shall abide by heaven's will.
Good work... I was looking forward to at least another stanza. I see the poem as an experiential, and it is not complete at the level of the subject's experience. Hey, may be its just a resolute will.. then it is fine. All the same, it is well versed
Heaven's will. good poem. thanks. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A few powerful words that are well penned as well as spiritually touching! Going the right direction my dear friend! Keep it up and God Bless You! 10+++