Ayes And Noes Poem by Akhtar Jawad
Ayes And Noes
He wrote yes to love,
he wrote no to hate.
He wrote yes to justice,
he wrote no to injustice.
He wrote yes to peace,
he wrote no to war.
Now he is in a mental hospital,
always shouting,
"Please give me a chance,
I want to edit my poems
and replace
ayes for noes
and noes for ayes! "
Philosophical ayes and noes... I would love to make it '''eyes and nose''' SEE CLEARLY... SMELL SWEETLY... AND SIR DO COMMENT ON MY COMMENTATORS POETRY...KINDLY VISIT MY page will ye
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Wow, this is a brilliant thought provoking poem. A philosophical write that focuses on the character of a man. Yes, a man who says no to love, yes to hate, no to justice, yes to injustice, no to peace and yes to war is a mentally deranged man. He should be locked up in a mental hospital and be treated to make him aware of what is right from wrong.
There is a lofty message in this poem though it gives an instant laughter......fabulous write
Great write! Please do not replace ayes for noes, we have enough problems and injustice in this world. Let's keep everything positive: ayes for love and justice, noes for war and injustice.
A world gone mad, values upside down. There is much food for thought here. Thank you sir.
A magnificent piece of work! I absolutely agree with Rose! To MYPoemList
The great poet has touched an important issue through this magnificent poem. A favorite and into my Poem List.10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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His moral votes will only be counted in a moral universe. Meanwhile he was judged in a harsh courtroom for which he did not prepare himself. If only people can hear the beauty of his testimony, offered in a courtroom of his own creation.