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Baby Breath

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The soul still slips on the black ice of love
The heart still sows seeds of kisses
The brain still feeds the atmosphere with insecurities
The Sun still shines trying to melt the cold away.
And now the birds unite and chirp
The flowers sway in the breeze
And them lovers walk hand in hand
Holding hands, scared -
Spring might freeze their hands forever.
And burn them away before the snowflakes fall.

Friday, March 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,love,love and friendship,lovers,spring,together,winter
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2018

Hi Asavri A new poetic experience. Love and are looked at, from a totally different angle... Lovers walk hand in hand Holding hands, scared Spring might freeze their hands forever... Very beautifully expressed, the concerns of love, how the lovers are scared of the world around them.... How fearsome is the world. Rather, for the lovers... A 100000.. Onto my poem list.

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Asavri Dhillon 03 January 2021

Thank you so much

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tom billsborough 03 March 2018

You have an innate sense of rhythm. The last line of a very fine poem is truly beautiful both in content and its musicality.

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Asavri Dhillon 03 January 2021

Thanks a lot

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2018

The flowers sway in the breeze. An amazing poem is wisely written about love and friendship...10

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Asavri Dhillon 03 January 2021

Thank you! !

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