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In The Winter's Bough

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One touch and the light will glow
With my hand in the winter's bough
I ran so far that now I can't ignore
The touch of mine on the winter's bough

Once you feel my pain
You will not be able to return
To your soul's kingdom
As then I'll be the one to pour
All the sadness and grace
Inside your heart's room
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Saturday, November 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
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COMMENTS
Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2018
Hi Asavri, Very heartfelt write.. Once you feel my pain You will not be able to return To your soul's kingdom..... A drop of tears dries in my eyes Into very soft ice Does not dare to look into your eyes Fearing, it may melt my heart....
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Asavri Dhillon 02 June 2018
Hi... Thank you so much.. means a lot. A drop of tears.... it may melt my heart.. Beautiful...: -)
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Fabrizio Frosini 11 January 2015
thanks for sharing.. and remember: everyone who reads you poetry enters your own Universe -even if for a while- Through poetry, we (the all of us who read your lines) are in touch.. and viceversa... Keep on writing! Fabrizio
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Edward Kofi Louis 02 January 2015
Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.
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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2014
Exquisite! Lovely! Insightful! A beautiful encapsulation of well articulated train of thoughts penned down in poetic diction. Another addition to my favourite. I have read you other two poems, there are very good too. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX.
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Fabrizio Frosini 06 December 2014
so young, but so good already. Nice poem. Keep on writing!
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Amarjit Ghumman 06 December 2014
Great imaginary and work which you are doing. You have the capability to analyze the things with fresh symbols. You are writing free verse poetry but it is rhythmic. You have the great ideas at this little age. Keep it up! God Bless You.
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Now that I'm on the edge Of every place I saw In the middle of dark world I can't see anything A very beautiful poem on winter in its entirety how winter comes and sheds its shadow on all Wonderful Well expressed.Well done Keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan
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Akhtar Jawad 06 December 2014
I see all the essentials of a good poetry in this write. Lovely thoughts, lovely use of words, lovely flow of lines and overall the music, I am sure a good singer can sing this sweet song in a very attractive tune. Asavri I congratulate you for this poem, if you continue in this lovely style I hope very soon you will become a popular poetess.....10
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Savita Tyagi 23 November 2014
Beautiful poem. Amazing. So vivid in imagination and style. It talks so beautifully about life's dreams, hopes, despair and courage all in one breath. Thank you Asavri for sharing and thank you so much for your comment on my recent poem. Best wishes.
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Rajnish Manga 22 November 2014
Beautiful poem about the life's poignant situations from which one tries to wriggle out unhurt. Thanks Asavriji.
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