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The Dreadful Flames Of Love

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The dimly lit room with a candle
Her finger tips dripping in blood
Dance on the piano keys slowly
Kissing the music with her broken pieces
And the darkness envelops her body
Comforting her insecure heart.
The tears fall off her eyes silently
Ignoring the eyes of the walls
Sliding down her smooth, warm cheeks.
And her dress still carries the smell of his perfume

Her thoughts compel her to set it on fire
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Monday, March 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: abandoned,betrayal,broken heart,life,life and death,love
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2018

You are a poet of innate talent, dear!

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 June 2018

Hi Asavri, Lovely rendering. I am taken by surprise by your lines: And darkness envelopes her body Comforting her insecure heart... Wow! What an awesome imagery... I am reminded of the famous lines by Great Malayalam Poet. Akkitham: Velicham dukkhamaanunnee Tamassallow sukhpradham.... Meaning, Light is harbinger of sadness, my dear! Darkness is comforting... Great people think alike!

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 May 2018

Very impressive write, Asavri Dhillon. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 March 2018

Asavri, such a well expressed poem??????

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