Asavri Dhillon
Chandigarh, India
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Rating: 4.5
After breaking apart, am reborn
As people never groan
Am reborn, into a new personality
Where people can't doubt my ability

In the midst of the ocean I lay
But now am above the ocean and I can say
I've experienced the ocean
From the sea bed to the sea shore
People ignore
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Saturday, November 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: human nature
written on 23.05.2013
Khairul Ahsan 22 February 2015
A nice poem with an apt title. The courage and confidence expressed is praiseworthy. If I may suggest, in my opinion, if- 'From the inside to the outside core' -this line is edited to read: 'From the outside to the inside core', then the line would fit better in the poem. Core is usually inside, not outside.
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Asavri Dhillon 20 May 2015
Thank you sir for reading my poem and for the remarks. Sir, I appreciate your suggestion but over here I've taken two different symbols at the same time...from the inside - i.e. from the inside of a human body, the root of a human soul - Heart and the outside core - To this World..., We - a “human body” is like a point which is somewhere inside it... and to us we have two cores to handle, one is our own core- our heart and the another is the world’s core which to us is our outside but to the world it is its core i.e. our looks from which people judge us.
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Parry Sanan 11 January 2015
Nice piece of work ... other two poems are also awesome ... keep writing .. :)
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Akhtar Jawad 07 December 2014
An amazing philosophic poem. so many meanings can be assigned to it depending on the readers' approach. My approach says when one separates himself from worldly desires his thinking and personality climbs to a height whereat he becomes a different man. If this separation is after experiencing the world the man firmly grips the height so achieved and seldom falls to the depths of the ocean. A great write..............10
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Chinedu Dike 22 November 2014
A nice piece of poetry. I like the articulation of the poem, the poet's conviction, courage and faith. A good write. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.
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