C.J. Heck

Rookie - 273 Points (August 10 / Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida)

Baby's First Christmas (Children)

Poem by C.J. Heck

So, this is Christmas morning...
everyone is here.
I don't really understand it
cause it isn't very clear,

but Mom and Dad are happy,
there's pretty ribbons everywhere,
lots of things that they call presents
and even paper I can tear.

They keep showing me this new stuff,
balls and books and even soxes...
they don't seem to know how fun it is
just playing with these boxes.

Comments about Baby's First Christmas (Children) by C.J. Heck

  • Linda Jenkinson (11/17/2005 3:01:00 PM)

    i agree with mary...talented...(Report)Reply

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  • John Kay (11/15/2005 8:03:00 AM)

    CJ-You're just too good at this. There's nothing like a well written poem, no matter who the audience.(Report)Reply

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  • Mary Nagy (11/12/2005 9:16:00 AM)

    C.J. I think you are so talented with your childrens poetry.........(as well as your others) . You really do have a gift and I'm glad you share it here. Sincerely, Mary(Report)Reply

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    I love remembering my son's (now 22) first Christmas in this world. I wanted to make it so special....and doesn't even remember!(Report)Reply

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  • Slimboydim . (11/12/2005 8:13:00 AM)

    This brightened my Saturday. Cool and fresh,
    put a smile on my face. It is nice to see fun
    things tried with childrens poetry.
    Rhyming Soxes And Boxes wont suit
    everyone, i thought that was fantastic! ! !
    Aimed at children, but pleased this
    (so called) adult.
    Thank you for sharing.
    Kindest Regards Slim. x.(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, November 12, 2005

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