Back Poem by Smoky Hoss

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Rating: 5.0


I miss what once I thought I knew
sun of yellow, sky of blue,
sweet summer breeze
and swinging through tall trees.
Fresh pine on the wind, back
before I knew of sin.
Warm evenings that sigh
amongst a star studded sky,
uninterupted sleep so good
hot dogs and campfire wood.
Friends simple and fond
swimming slow and easy in the old gravel pond,
that beautiful black dog I had
and most of all, dear old mom and dad.
- Perhaps I never truly knew then
what I think I know now, but
if I could, I would go back once more
just to briefly hold it all again, somehow.

Saturday, February 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: dad,dogs,mom,swimming
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 03 March 2014

beautiful Smoky, sometimes there is that one moment in time where we wish we could just go back. A really beautiful poem.

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Valerie Dohren 27 February 2014

Memories of childhood and innocence long sconce gone - very touching and poignant. I am sure we can all relate to this Smoky.

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Juan Olivarez 25 February 2014

Ah yes. Been there, know that feeling. Great work Smoky. My new Dell is not allowing me to rate your poems. I will come back on line later with my phone and do so.

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Joseph Anderson 24 February 2014

Nostalgia just chokes me up.A great reminder of things gone with the winds of time.Sadly we can't return. Smoky -a brief, but endearing poem, though sad, yet a joy to read

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