Baking The World Poem by malini kadir

malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY

Baking The World

Rating: 5.0


Baking the world
With golden warmth
Fermenting the breadwinners
The rising Sun
Suppressed the bubbling youthful fun
As clouds dark
Swam into focus
His brow was wet
His toil sweat

Were the clouds gathering
Shrinking his horizon?
Focusing his visions
To near vicinity?
He continued his work
Day may wade by
Lurking in the waters of fear
He will wet not his optimism
He summoned his will
To inner conflicts still

Sun down was sure to silent slip in.........
Do what you may!
Why not optimistic, enthusiastic grin
At people on your way?


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~malinikadir

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sameer Ahmed 10 June 2009

The optimism shown in this poem shows your practical approach towards life. This attitude leads to a personality that seldom falls. The poem has a bifid meaning in it with one being the ability or the power of sun to overwhelm the in motion life on earth by its heat, but the other aspect of the poem what I have conceived is very much enriched with a strong motivation that anyone can have the same glow like the sun and that can lead him or her to celebrate the glorious hegemony one day......10/10

0 0 Reply
Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 June 2009

yeah optimistic outlook is far better than pessimistic outlook.................Good images in the poem.............

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
malini kadir

malini kadir

Nagapatinam, a coastal port, Tamilnadu, India NOW RESIDING IN TRICHY
Close
Error Success