Battlefield Poem by Kaede Rirunaru

Battlefield

Rating: 5.0


From a land of sand arise two kinds of warrior...
A vagabonds leading into the same phenomenon...
Pass through up hill and down dale...
Crushing every stones hanging from fountains...

Two warriors in sweat wetted the realms of their existence...
Manifest the longing from the untamed freedom...
Arousing one's emotion jailed from boredom...
Insatiable for the needs between each unveiled tounges...

Bodies conquering bodies...
Wrestled, rolled down into the flames...
Body growled request for desire...
But chilled from identified unknown identity...

Slowly bodies started to explode...
Stealth, stolen the worth thing and leave...
Let her melted heart flowing through waves..
Breaking the bondage of silhouette lies..

Upon the higest fortress were sacredness remains...
Reunited Glory and Grace in to a Shield...
She killed the man pierced through his heart...
Until, the hollow swallowed the tenderness of night...



Min 'Grace' Sia feat. Naru 'Rirunaru' Kaede
...It was made despite the distance...

PS: For all man in the world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

i am in love with this poem i really love it.u have a really nice way with words.

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Kite Remedy 19 December 2008

that's so powerful sentences out of you, gals.. strongly built, heavenly made, a great writing from both of you..

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Anjali Sinha 16 December 2008

Eureka! ! Eureka! ! youve done it again wowwww! ! ! ! ! ! your battlefield explodes the splinters pierced the inners of my heart well done NARU AND MIN I LOVE YOU BOTH God Bless A++++++ anjali

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2008

A very nice piece of work from you.please, do keep it up and write for us to learn from you as well.Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Min Sia 16 December 2008

My dearest friend..we made it! Oh my..I can't wait to be read this by everyone! Thanks for your inspiration..I thank God for letting me know you despite the distance... Hope this friendship will never ends..and I'm looking forward to see you personally... Anyway..we're still young... Regards, Darmine

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Kaede Rirunaru

Kaede Rirunaru

Surabaya, Indonesia
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