Elena V. Moonray

Rookie (April 24,1880 (I wish) / Moscow)

Be Like Water, My Friend - Hypnotic Induction

Poem by Elena V. Moonray

'Be like water, my friend, be like water,
Don’t be rigid; just go with a flow...'
'Be like water' - you asked me. 'Don't hold to me.
I am leaving, so please let me go.'

'Water is shapeless, my friend, water is flowing
Water is moving; and it cannot die...
It may freeze sometimes, when it gets too cold,
But you know, the spring will arrive.'

***
I’m becoming shapeless, I’m becoming fluid,
I am listening to what you say...
I got frozen, my friend, by your sudden coldness
But I’m finding through cracks my new way.

***
Now I am floating, again. I am glowing.
I’m reflecting the sun and the sky...
And sometimes the clouds. And the wind is blowing...

I’m already far away...Just stopped to wave 'Good Bye! '

October 6,2005


Comments about Be Like Water, My Friend - Hypnotic Induction by Elena V. Moonray

  • Vidushi Khera (10/9/2005 2:11:00 PM)

    a different side to water....i liked it...do read my poem Emotions...it's about water too....a bit...just a different side of the same coin

    I guess yours is more readable and more often true and much more important to learn! !

    LuV
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  • Max Reif (10/7/2005 8:20:00 AM)

    The piece has a nice progression. It moves well.(Report)Reply

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  • Peter A. Crowther (10/7/2005 12:03:00 AM)

    I enjoyed this poem with its sustained metaphor and pleasing rhymes. Good write(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2005

Poem Edited: Wednesday, May 26, 2010