** Be With Me ** Poem by ANJALI SINHA

** Be With Me **

Rating: 5.0


As I awoke one morning,
a bright summers day
amidst glimmer of sunshine
peeped underline
the windows
opening my driveway.
The scent in the air brings
The roses in full swing
Carried within its wings
your unspoken word’s zing.
Come to my heart and be with me

On the silk of my hair,
A fragrance left there
Like the musk of the deer
In heat when you're near
Stands implanted
Knitted and sewed
in strands of gold
Thy name,
etched with blood of my soul
Then come to my heart and be with me

Can I speak of parting verses?
Then ask, as much, of me to do
Words don’t part, but my lips rehearse
Sealed with kisses
From your cherried lips dismisses
No winters last forever
No storms blow forever
Then I revel in the rhythm of the
Beats of your heart.
O come then, come to my heart and be with me

Tore indeed the veil of your heart
to see, my name inscribed in art
Then why do you start
Counting my kisses
on the face of another’s fine chart?
Is it just to see me
reeling with sadness
revealing truths like holy scripts madness.
then silence makes sweet the presence depart.
O just come to my heart and be with me

Anjali
06-12-2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 08 December 2009

When enemies crowd or friends flea Be with me When there is tide or ebb in the life’s sea Be with me When Chest swells or knee totters Be with me...............a good write....10+++.....

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Dr.subhendu Kar 06 December 2009

Thy name, etched with blood of my soul Then come to my heart and be with me...................... passion riffles by luscious glow as heart needs resonance of redness as gleams of love enlighten soul love etches rhythm in ech speckles of blood.................utterly evocative by passion longing of love, wrought ingenious by metaphors,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Romeo Della Valle 06 December 2009

Wow, what a very romantic poem, full of true feelings and also very well penned, you definitely got my vote,10+++, great job, keep it up, I also hope the love of your life will be with you...Love and Peace...

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Lynn Glover 06 December 2009

Anjali: A beautifully written poem and I do hope that soon your lover will be with you. I like the structure and hope to read more of your work. Your friend Lynn

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Ramesh T A 06 December 2009

Very interesting to read the developing thoughts of the poem!

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Khairul Ahsan 28 January 2015

A wonderful poem, very appealing! The title attracts and the text convinces the readers that you are a poet of natural talent.10/10 from me.

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premji premji 02 August 2010

be with me in poetfreak.com too.

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Compelling and creative to the core. Well done my friend! 10/10

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 19 January 2010

If no one is there. I will surely respond and will be with you as u requested me in your poem (provided u wrote the poem for me! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !)

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Sadiqullah Khan 30 December 2009

Added to my fav.......

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