bilbo reid


Beach Girl - Poem by bilbo reid

She walked so slowly along the sand,
Carrying sea shells in her hand,
Ithought i heard a mermaid sigh,
As this beauty tripped on bye,

She seemed to be without a care,
Asolitary woman with sun bleached hair,
When she approached her smile was warm,
As she strolled bye i watched her form,

The surf was lapping around her feet,
She seemed oblivious to the heat,
As she tiptoed past she hummed a tune,
Enjoying this hot day in june,

My pencils frantic as i sketch,
Those laughing eyes i'll never forget,
Yes, on that day she brought a glow,
This beach beauty i may never know,

Now just an image on my wall,
From a sunny day that i recall,
But from my memory she is fading fast,
Just an apparition from the past,

Perhaps she never had been real,
In witch case this is so surreal,
Who was this lassie suntanned and tall,
Why is she hanging on my wall.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

from some careful observations on the beach! !

Comments about Beach Girl by bilbo reid

  • Clarence Prince (6/24/2013 11:42:00 AM)


    Nice work Billy, I like it! Blessings to you! (Report) Reply

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  • (2/10/2013 11:36:00 AM)


    I loved it to...The rhyme is good and flows well...ends good aswell....I hope your other poems ryhme because I cant find many on this site that do, and they are the only ones that I personaly enjoy and find talent in.Keep up the good work :) (Report) Reply

  • Adeline Foster (9/9/2012 2:40:00 PM)


    Loved it. But she surely was not a 'witch'. I think you meant to say 'which' in line 2 of the last verse. Read mine - Storm Song -
    Adeline
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  • (9/8/2012 12:42:00 PM)


    Real or imagined you did a great job telling us. I sure wish to see that painting-a smooth and
    sweetly flowing write
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  • Heather Wilson (8/30/2012 3:21:00 PM)


    Lovely poem, brilliant finish, she was not an appartion after all, loved it. (Report) Reply

  • (8/30/2012 3:09:00 PM)


    Great mental pictures drawn here. We always want beauty to last. Great write! (Report) Reply

  • Dawn Ferrett (8/30/2012 1:24:00 PM)


    Sweet memory, or just a dream! Either way it makes for a lovely poem! ! ! I really enjoyed reading it! Dawn xx (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 30, 2012



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