Beads On A String Poem by Ruta Mohapatra

Beads On A String

Rating: 5.0


In search of happiness, they go
Moving all over the world
Carrying their pain within

The seed of the solution
Is within the problem
Dig deep inside

It is so easy to forgive oneself!
Blame others and the anger grows
Blame yourself and it subsides

A good poem stands on its own
Without any prop, without decorations
Without explanations

Sunday, January 30, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: didactic
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
NK DASH 31 January 2022

The seed of solution is within the problem, a good poem stands on its own.Brilliant write Rutaji.

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Ruta Mohapatra 31 January 2022

Thank you, Mr. Dash! Nice comments!

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 31 January 2022

Thoughtful poetry. I liked the flow and the message.5*****

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Ruta Mohapatra 31 January 2022

Thank you, Mr. Nehal! A pleasure to read your comment!

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Pallab Chaudhury 30 January 2022

the very fact is well depicted....dear poet.

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Ruta Mohapatra 31 January 2022

Thanks Mr. Chaudhury, nice to get your comment! I have read and liked some of your Haikus.

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David Wood 30 January 2022

Absolutely right Ruta. Sometimes I read the notes are longer than the poem on this site.

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Ruta Mohapatra 31 January 2022

Yeah, David, quite right!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 January 2022

Thanks for these words

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Ruta Mohapatra 31 January 2022

Thanks Ann, for visiting my poem!

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