Friday, December 11, 2009

~ Beau John Keats ~

Rating: 4.4
Ms. Nivedita

Boiledegg white face
Curly cloudy indocile hair
Deer spry eyes
Hellenic nose
Steeping neck, a
Pisa Leaning Tower
With a Ruby dot
Accentuated malars, flushing
Sliced watermelon leafy lips
Smile runnel flowething
Ivory leggy the Dame!

In the gamut of twinkly beamish
Streamlet of blue blood
Floweth up visibly
From bosom
Liquid fire
On nude neck

Many dived
In bosoms to die
To dye in blue beauty
Poison blue.

Like tempest
Boisterous Beau
Nears closes to Dame.

Flower Krishnachura
Glowing breathing
Fire flame
Singing adieu
Bon voyage to Beau?

Those blued fire
Entice, Lure
Coy Decoy Beau
Impulsively enjoy
Dying in
Steeping neck
Bohemian bosom
Fire flames burping.

Beau diffuses for
Blooming death…
Engages in Dame’s
Ruby dot draw
Lip mark slick silken.
Beau John Keats says,
‘Hey Dame enter in you
With body mind cargo
Constellate your
Geometric corpus by
Fragmented blue miniscule
With a smile face wear’.

For blue beauty poison
Helplessly yet sincerely
Dame pules mewls for
Inevitable eventually
Of Beau John Keats.

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Jaya Varma 12 August 2013
its par above! ! i really need to read a lot to even comment on this! ! Greattt! ! ! !
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Harriet James 28 July 2012
This is a great work of art Niv and a great tribute to Keats' suggested treatment for melancholy. That joy and sadness may co exist reigns true in your blue beauty poison blue. A great eye opener!
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Vipins Puthooran 03 December 2011
A noble tribute to the great poet John Keats- Namasthea! ! ! ! !
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Claudia Krizay 28 April 2011
Very interesting tribute to John Keats -well done.
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Subbaraman N V 28 November 2010
Great! Keats must be happy from the heaven!
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Eli Medina 07 September 2010
its like ones reading into your own little world liked it very much!
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Renee Ho 31 July 2010
I couldn't really understnd some of our vocabulary. I had to search up some words in my dictionary and on the computer. But overall i think i quite enjoyed your poem. Good Job! You make a fine poet! Keep on Keeping on! -Renee
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Cat Tiger 31 July 2010
Many American women could not understand the enormous sexual awareness that you possess. It comes, I would presume, from the repressed nature of your culture's social mores, which heightens both physical and spiritual awareness and response. Though you struggle with English words and syntax, your inner emotion commands the words you choose to relate this awareness and physicality. Very interesting. -Cat
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Anita Trivedi 31 July 2010
Good one... Good job
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Lysa Rohlsen 30 July 2010
this poem gives off the essence that is came strait from your heart. I like it because it makes you think and wonder and it sparks the imagination and i love the imagery. I also like your reference to a blue beauty poison...
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