Beauties You Have Given Poem by louis rams

Beauties You Have Given

Rating: 4.8


LORD you hold my heart in your hand
of my life you're in command.
you've been with me from my birth
teaching and guiding me so that i can see
all the beauties that you have given me.

i turn and look all around
of beauties lost and beauties found.
the beauty of the sunrise in the early hours
the openings of all the flowers.

the smells of the grass ever so green
and everything else in between.
the oceans, the rivers, the mountaintops too
all of this was made by you.

the animals, the plants, and crops galore
is everything that we've been searching for.

we have food to eat and water to drink.
we even have a bathroom sink.

we have roofs over our heads to keep us dry
if off our butts we get up to try.
we see new life spring up every day
in every form and every way.

watching the reflections of the sun upon the waters
and the sands upon the beach
and boys and girls jumping into it
finding a bit of relief

these are just a few of the beauties that i see
and i'm sure that you have seen
just as much as me.

enjoy all the beauties that surround our lives
and if your with the one you love
then it's twice as nice.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

we are surrounded with the bliss and beauty of the creator...a beautiful poem...10

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~ Jon London ~ 27 July 2009

Your love for the one.......is beautifully expressed here Louis...all beauty before the eye is the Creation of the finest sculptor of life it self......wonderful piece my friend......we are truly grateful to him....and to you for sharing this with us...10++

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Christine Kerr 27 July 2009

Looking on the bright side of things, So much more simpler and fun to do then finding the fault. Beautiful all around.10++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 July 2009

Spiritual aspect is great but worldly beauties are also real blessings from God. To be positive we can see all around the beauty of the creator and the creations. The poem deserves 10/10. Regards Naseer

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Shashendra Amalshan 28 July 2009

Hello sir, ... 'enjoy all the beauties that surround our lives and if your with the one you love then it's twice as nice. ' NIce inspirational write this one.... Leslie Alexis send me these sorts of mails.... i know this much.. Jesus showed us the kind of love that one can die for.. kind of love that he died for the entire humanity...... I know this much too sir.. with love we can defeat many devils... best weapon against evil is not Ak 47 or M16.. but love.. this is nice as always.... with lots of love shan

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another warm, lovely poem poem ended as it is supposed to be..well done

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Deborah Cromer 01 August 2009

Heaven on earth. Beautifully written about life and it's glory. DC

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Ted M 31 July 2009

When we really open our eyes and look around us, yeah we find beauties all around. Its a lovely creation, we have been bestowed upon by the Almighty. Lovely write, Thank you for sharing with us and making us realise.......10+++

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Tsira Goge 31 July 2009

Mr Louis, very beautiful poem of gratitude..10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Sandra Fowler 29 July 2009

You pen poems of inspiration and grace. Your positive thoughts are a scource of peace and joy to those who read you. 10/10. Warm regards, Sandra

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