Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Beautiful Oak Tree Comments

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Your soul and memory of your life is like a beautiful oak tree.
You provide shelter from the storm…homes for the homeless…humans like creatures, all different, finds sanctuary within you! Shade, when reality burns like the angry sun…and most importantly, you provide oxygen which helps us breathe… even when we no longer want to!
You stand tall and firm…reaching to the sky…reminding us to look up and know there is a reason …you now fly!
Beautiful Angel …we look up and imagine your smile!
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Pheko Motaung 04 February 2012

Such beautifully crafted lines bring a tear to one's eyes! Congratulations on a beautifully written poem

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Saadat Tahir 15 January 2012

you provide oxygen which helps us breathe… even when we no longer want to! thought provoking nice lines cheers

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Shaakiera Schroeder

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Johannesburg South Africa
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