Sanket Adhikari

Beautiful Philosophy - Poem by Sanket Adhikari

One thing in the world never can be bought;
This is the sacred one, keep that in your thoughts.
And love is that thing I'm talking about
And you must choose a single one in the crowd
To love.It must be full of faith,
No doubt, nothing bad, and hard to break.
And my girl I've found that love in you,
And don't know any reason why I love you.
But I love you, yes, I do, more than a lot.
And you are the one whom I've found in the crowd
And I can say 'I Love You' in the crowd, so loud.

Your blink is like a spark, that shakes me;
Your kiss is like a mint, that refreshes me.
When I got the touch of your hand, it just blows my mind,
Then I pull you closer and closer to me, leaving out all behind.
You're my life, my each and everything;
I bid you all my life, all of me, leaving nothing.
There is no ego in my love, it is not satanic;
My love is true for you, and it is platonic.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: ABC

Comments about Beautiful Philosophy by Sanket Adhikari

  • Souren Mondal (11/4/2015 5:27:00 AM)

    'There is no ego in my love, it is not satanic;
    My love is true for you, and it is platonic.'

    Interesting ending to the poem with a couplet that suits the title of your poem...

    Thanks for sharing Sanket..
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  • Hazel Durham (11/1/2015 2:05:00 AM)

    Original, fresh and beautiful write, love is the most precious emotion we have we must cherish our beloved forever! (Report) Reply

  • Wes Vogler (10/30/2015 5:41:00 PM)

    I have no doubt this declaration is sincere ... but you MUST toss out the last two lines. A re-write will improve the whole immensely. You have a talent but you must work a little harder. thanks... Wes (Report) Reply

  • Edmund Strolis (10/29/2015 3:49:00 AM)

    The sentiment is beautiful to say I love you in a crowd and be glad to say it loud. Wonderful writing. (Report) Reply

    Sanket Adhikari Sanket Adhikari (10/29/2015 4:05:00 AM)

    Thank You so much..

  • Kelly Kurt (10/28/2015 12:54:00 PM)

    The most popular theme in poetry. Nicely done, Sanket (Report) Reply

    Sanket Adhikari Sanket Adhikari (10/28/2015 1:17:00 PM)

    Thank You,
    That's a starting.I'll try to improve myself through the course of time.

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 28, 2015

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