Beauty.... Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Beauty....

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Beauty....

The moody morning sky,
covering my palette again
white,
green,
yellow,
zinc
white
and red
the ev'ning planet, spinning on,
the wintry rains in vain
my lover's blue came in,
ev'ryone drops dead.

While gazing at the movements,
perplexed and cool
white turns black,
ruby red a brownish mess,
the fool
where is he,
where is he, my metaphoric lover,
acentric he moves on
with the blackest cover.

The dark green trees
are gazing at me
why are there deep-blue clouds,
treading forth, why?
I lose trees out of sight,
gone is the lovely emerald light
now almost night,
all blackest diamonds sleep tight.

Awfully sleepy,
my mind is heady,
my passion blurred,
when I gave up,
I see beauty,
how absurd!

My most magical moon
right on the spot,
is the most beautiful fluorescent
biggest dot
on the home firmament
beauty on its spot
hypnotizing
heaven-high
below the residence of God....



© Sylvia Frances Chan

A.D. Tuesday the 11th of December 2018
@ 7.56 hrs. A.M. West-European Time

Tuesday, December 11, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,god,poem,tribute
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
on the home firmament
beauty on its spot
hypnotizing
heaven-high
below the residence of God....

© Sylvia Frances Chan

A.D. Tuesday the 11th of December 2018
@ 7.56 hrs. A.M. West-European Time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 17 December 2018

You have beautifully observed the moody morning sky and you beautifully bring out moon's beauty into mind. We feel the real and eternal beauty under God's residence in his garden. An excellent expression motivates mind of a reader. A great poem of beauty is well penned.10

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M Asim Nehal 13 December 2018

Magic of the nature beautifully described in forms of colours. I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.10+

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2018

Thank you so much for your honesty, Mohammed, I appreciate your precious comments and specific compliment. Also for the 10+.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 13 December 2018

Such beauty in colours, so well crafted in this beautiful poem, Sylvia.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2018

Thank you so much for your valuable comment and your sympathetic compliment. I appreciate them highly. G.B.U. in abundance. Amen

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Valsa George 13 December 2018

My most magical moon right on the spot, is the most beautiful fluorescent biggest dot on the home firmament................. Beauty surrounds us and we are inebriated in the beauty of the universe created by the Almighty! The magical moon that appears as the biggest fluroscent dot is indeed a spectacular sight! Enjoyed your lovely poem! A 10

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Sylvia Frances Chan 13 December 2018

Happy to hear that you enjoyed my lovely poem. Thank you for your kindest response, Valsa and your precious 10.

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