Beauty In Dark Comments

A delightful poem Rini. Loved reading this outstanding poem. Top score.

There wakes up the little child inside you Chasing the fireflies dazzling ahead of you The innocent smile cheers up the mind And the giggles with the wind entwined......touchingly portrayed. Beautiful poem. Appreciated. Thanks.

The contrast between light and darkness, both have their own unique character and charm. But your poem goes a bit deeper, delving into the joys and sorrows that the realities of this world can bring. The horns of progress, the aloneness in civilization; yet, nature's underlying beauty and our childlike marvel of the natural world.

Light and darkness are two sides of the same coin! After the end of a big tunnel we feel the brightness! Darkness has its inherent beauty! We can't leave either of them! A very insightful poem Rini...I liked it...10

I love the night.Even more now that I read this poem!

Part 3 Life is like that! !

Part 2 Malayalam poet Akkitham has written വെളിച്ചം ദുഃഖമാണുണ്ണീ തമസ്സല്ലോ സുഖപ്രദം.... your poem reflects this couplet And have you read poems of M N Paloor? He has written... ഈ ജീവിതമെന്തൊരു ബോറാണെന്നോ! Good reading. A 10+++

Hi Rini, Beautifully written poetry....loved reading.....A poem on the beauty and soothing comforts of the night...where twinkling stars and the moon keep you company. A breeze that swipes away all your gloom struts with you.. and when, finally sun rises, all are gone. You have to face the world alone...

Rini, inside of us is the innerchild. Your poem brings it out in darkness. A well worked write.++10 Robert

This is a very nice poem about beauty in the dark.