There is beauty in the dark
When you're bored of light and it's spark
Night has it's own beauty
Though in the dark you may feel gloomy
The twinkling stars and the moon
And the breeze to swipe away the blues
There wakes up the little child inside you
Chasing the fireflies dazzling ahead of you
The innocent smile cheers up the mind
And the giggles with the wind entwined
In joy then you sing like a nightingale
A dream or is it a tale
And then the sun appears rising over the horizon
The dreams ends and you are into the life soon
The chirping birds and the noisy horns
But you have to face the world alone
Rini, inside of us is the innerchild. Your poem brings it out in darkness. A well worked write.++10 Robert
Hi Rini, Beautifully written poetry....loved reading.....A poem on the beauty and soothing comforts of the night...where twinkling stars and the moon keep you company. A breeze that swipes away all your gloom struts with you.. and when, finally sun rises, all are gone. You have to face the world alone...
Part 2 Malayalam poet Akkitham has written വെളിച്ചം ദുഃഖമാണുണ്ണീ തമസ്സല്ലോ സുഖപ്രദം.... your poem reflects this couplet And have you read poems of M N Paloor? He has written... ഈ ജീവിതമെന്തൊരു ബോറാണെന്നോ! Good reading. A 10+++
A delightful poem Rini. Loved reading this outstanding poem. Top score.
There wakes up the little child inside you Chasing the fireflies dazzling ahead of you The innocent smile cheers up the mind And the giggles with the wind entwined......touchingly portrayed. Beautiful poem. Appreciated. Thanks.
The contrast between light and darkness, both have their own unique character and charm. But your poem goes a bit deeper, delving into the joys and sorrows that the realities of this world can bring. The horns of progress, the aloneness in civilization; yet, nature's underlying beauty and our childlike marvel of the natural world.
Light and darkness are two sides of the same coin! After the end of a big tunnel we feel the brightness! Darkness has its inherent beauty! We can't leave either of them! A very insightful poem Rini...I liked it...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a very nice poem about beauty in the dark.