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Beauty Of My Love

Rating: 4.3

Smiles like magic, her eyes are pearls,
Hairs smells ravishing bound in curls...
Lovely fingers over her hairs she brush,
And in this world I develop the biggest crush...

She is the girl with a golden heart,
Impressing everyone is her major art...
Around her the weather seems so neat,
Gazing at her my heart skips a beat...

She enters through the door when I gaze,
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Its true that Love is the best feeling in the world.. some are lucky to get their true love but some are not.. Using simple and loveable words, I have described both the inner and outer beauty of my beloved.. Hope you like it..
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 07 March 2013

love.........lovable............outstanding...................vast....................and excellent...................... bravo sir, well done

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Jaya Mishra 15 March 2013

She sure is one lucky miss..... So beautifull have you described her beauty that it makes me appreciate her beauty all beautifully! ! Loved reading this! !

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Srijeeta Manna 10 March 2013

the feeling associated with the poem is beautiful!

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Yash Shinde 14 March 2014

....great descriptive poem, you quite well penned those emotions and features...lovely

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Heather Wilkins 11 December 2013

a well written poem describing a very important love in your life.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 26 April 2013

Wow a marvelous rhymin description of her poet sahil. Thumbs up!

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Akanksha Bhatt 29 March 2013

VOW...! ! ! Its perfect.. really.. the use of rhymes is so nice... and everything is so good ... really one of the best poem I've ever read in my whole life... ! ! ! ! I really liked it veryyyy much..!

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 19 March 2013

This is masterpiece brother, ...wow! ..what a complete poem! ..keep it up man. Siya_! !

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