Don't know if its me or you who started first...
Coz i thought the friendship we had was free of rust.
The time we spent, the moments we cheered...
But few misunderstandings and everyone feared.
This friendship glass might have shattered...
No matter how hard we try, cracks wont elapse.
And now when my heart is filled with regrets...
I wonder how will this life be without you dear friend.
When the mind was under the reign of ego...
And i never supposed you would just go.
I want you back at any cost...
Coz i really miss the friend i lost.
You backed me during the whole mess...
And took me out of every bustle.
But who can guide us through this situation...
Someone help, i'm tired of this anticipation.
Friends are important, friends are must...
Play safe, this relation is built on trust.
Late, but your value now i understand...
Believe me, nothing more i demand.
Just for old time sake, come back dear friend...
With pure love, a hand of friendship i extend.
I want you back at any cost...
Coz i really miss the friend i lost.
people always get the true value of things when they loose it..but if we ask for something with true heart we always get it and after reading your poem sir i am pretty sure you'll get your wish done for sure.....a lovely heartfelt poem thank you for sharing love payal
True friendship lasts forever. You will get her back someday or other. Beautiful write
A remarkable rhymin poem with wish of renewal of friendship. Dis ought to touch d friend.
I hope and wish you rekindle your friendship with that special friend you so miss and need, well written poem. Siya_! !
..ur.poems have essence of true emotions, that wonderfully bring out powerful thoughts, great wrk dear...
a very beautiful poems, , tramsparent towards emotions........., , , i wish that aal true friend should stay togeather always n never get seperated.............although the poem was really good.. i also invite u to read mine.........
When the mind was under the reign of ego... And i never supposed you would just go. What did you do man...what did you do! ! ! ! This line is just *perfect* and I never supposed you would just go..... Thats the theme n the line that touched my heart.... Friends are important, friends are must Play safe, this relations built on trust..... The way u started...building the scenario n the way u ended it with the sweet msg n regret..... A perfectionist... Loved this... :)
Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! OOOOOOOOOOh dear friend you shouldn't have written the wxplanation. This poem was just fantastic. Anybody can understand it. You have written your poem in pure words and it shows that your soul has learnt to understand the way friends should be treated. This is a well composed poem. You have used a poetic language and every line contains poetic qualities. Nice Sahil. I liked the rhyming lines. I wish your friend read it and return to you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
really emotional, regretful and true.........................true friends are a real treasure :)