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The Friend I Lost

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Don't know if its me or you who started first...
Coz i thought the friendship we had was free of rust.
The time we spent, the moments we cheered...
But few misunderstandings and everyone feared.

This friendship glass might have shattered...
No matter how hard we try, cracks wont elapse.
And now when my heart is filled with regrets...
I wonder how will this life be without you dear friend.

When the mind was under the reign of ego...
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POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
There was a friend of mine. She always looked
after me and guided me at every step. But few
misunderstandings let us apart. And due to the
common ego the gap just increased with time.
But now i understand the value of her friendship
in my life and i really wish she come back. Coz true friends are hard to find. So dear friend, this
poems goes for you. I hope someday you will give our friendship
another chance..
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jinal Oswal 15 November 2012

I wish your friendship revives again... Trust me I had goosebumps while reading this poem... it is so true to the heart... I could feel the emotion.. the pain.. Wonderful writing! !

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Vijay Sai R 11 November 2012

a nice moving poem...

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 10 November 2012

I hope and wish you rekindle your friendship with that special friend you so miss and need, well written poem. Siya_! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 09 November 2012

A remarkable rhymin poem with wish of renewal of friendship. Dis ought to touch d friend.

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Asif Andalib 08 November 2012

True friendship lasts forever. You will get her back someday or other. Beautiful write

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Yash Shinde 25 March 2014

..ur.poems have essence of true emotions, that wonderfully bring out powerful thoughts, great wrk dear...

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Shraddha The Poetess 19 February 2014

a very beautiful poems, , tramsparent towards emotions........., , , i wish that aal true friend should stay togeather always n never get seperated.............although the poem was really good.. i also invite u to read mine.........

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Karoliena Somura 02 December 2012

Lovely [3 and irreplacable

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Jaya Mishra 27 November 2012

When the mind was under the reign of ego... And i never supposed you would just go. What did you do man...what did you do! ! ! ! This line is just *perfect* and I never supposed you would just go..... Thats the theme n the line that touched my heart.... Friends are important, friends are must Play safe, this relations built on trust..... The way u started...building the scenario n the way u ended it with the sweet msg n regret..... A perfectionist... Loved this... :)

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Jahan Zeb 17 November 2012

Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! Stop! OOOOOOOOOOh dear friend you shouldn't have written the wxplanation. This poem was just fantastic. Anybody can understand it. You have written your poem in pure words and it shows that your soul has learnt to understand the way friends should be treated. This is a well composed poem. You have used a poetic language and every line contains poetic qualities. Nice Sahil. I liked the rhyming lines. I wish your friend read it and return to you.

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